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Betrayal

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Yet another picture that took me a week to make.

Go ahead, make fun of it, rip it to shreds then go favorite something REALLY stupid that I did (like a fashion design or that stupid kingdom hearts joke) instead.

...It seems to always happen like that.

*sniffle*

That's alright. It's my gallery. I can put up whatever crap I like making. *sigh*

Just pretend it's not shit. Thanks.

As usual, draw in ink, colored in photoshop.

There's a chapter of the manga this is from on here somewhere....The manga is Ten no Yume. I haven't introduced these guys yet though. They don't come in until later, but they're my token gay couple...sort of....
it's complicated....

Not like anyone actually cares....Should I even describe these pictures or does it make me full of myself?

Sigh......


UPDATE! *flail* By the way...It seems there is some confusion going on in the comments there below....lol....Just to clear everything thing up...Thought I mentioned it...but Anyway....They're both MEN.....These things...these little mix ups happen.....Lol...Now I'm sure that just pissed everyone off.....But yes....Anyway....now that that's solved, I shall take my leave....*scurries away clandestinely*
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I really like this a lot! I can't draw worth crap so take this critique however you want. There are only a few things I noticed that could be improved, but let me start off with what I <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="26" height="17" alt=":love:" title="Love"/> first! I love the emotion behind this. I see an almost tender betrayal, but the grasp he has on her back is so menacing to me. The blood coming out of her back is fantastic too! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la"/>
The background is really great, it's not too distracting but not boring which is great and it brings the focus in on the characters. I like the the clothing and the way it falls over their bodies, though I'm not a fan of the black thing around the dude's waist. What I don't like is the blood coming out of her tummy, it doesn't look right to me. Because the sword is running her through, I don't think the blood would be splattering forwards. A deep wet blood stain I think would have given it a more realistic and dramatic effect. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="21" height="15" alt=":dummy:" title="I am a dummy!"/> The anatomy is slightly off in just a couple places, but no bad at all. Overall I think this is a really solid image, and you are really talented! Keep up the awesome work! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="45" height="20" alt=":highfive:" title="High-five!"/>